что я нашла х)
запись сделала 9 октября 2008 года
читать дальшеМы вчера на английском писали сочинение, на любую тему, только надо было употребить 10 слов, которые мы учили. Я попросила учителя прочитать моё, проверить как текст, а на грамматику внимания не обращать. Он когда читал, два раза на меня переводил взгляд, улыбался, и говорил: "Очень хорошо!" И потом, когда прочитал, сказал, что текст хороший, а в грамматике есть ошибки. Ну вобщем вот оно. Тему я сразу придумала)) :-P O:-) O:-) :-*
Composition
There was one girl by name Andrea in Neumunster, Germany. She was 17 years old. She dremt to become a rock-singer. She sang very well, everyone told it to her. Her mother, Angelika, acknoledge that Andie, how everybode called her, will be a very popular rock-singer. But everybode didn't know, whe Andie wanna be famous very much...
Last decade Andrea was a fan of PANIK, German rock-group. They're sang about new generation, about than they will not hear another people, about love... Andie lived their mjsic. But not only music, she loved one guy from this group. His name is David, he played guitar, piano and sang. He was a real gentle, and he had the not familiar, attractive face. But Andie eliminate the things about David from her head, because she thought she will not meet him some day.
One day she consumed in her school. And then, after lanch, she had a music class. She prefered her voice, because she was have to sing in school musical. And her friend Eva said, "Stop it! I have something interesting for you!" Andrea asked, "What is it?" And Eva said, "I have tickets to PANIK's concert!" Andie just said, "What?!.."
It was the happiest day in Andrea's life. She wore the T-shire with "PANIK" logo. Andie was so beautiful in this day. She had gone to the consert. And when David had seen her, he sail, "Wow..." He falled in love with Andrea.
Later they are married, and were very happy together.